Years ago, in a small classroom I taught
Seven-year-olds, smart and adorable.
I read poetry aloud, funny and sweet,
But teaching poetry to write? Horrible!
I loved teaching all subjects, 3 R’s included,
But I, a poet? Am not!
And as you know, those second graders insisted
On using words like “booger” and “snot.”
Word families were easy; rhyming, a cinch!
But writing in verse is much harder.
“Just try it,” I said. “Keep on writing!” I begged,
“Your brains will grow so much smarter!”
So when this week’s topic for Spin Cycle I read,
My heart went a-flutter. “I can’t do it!” I cried.
On second thought, I recalled what I taught to those kids,
My own advice I should take, so I tried.
This poem you’re reading is my second attempt,
Please, please, don’t tease me or taunt.
If you’re graciously reading this post to the end,
Comment, and your own poetry skills flaunt!
Here is a poem written by one of my second graders, long ago. She is probably in college by now. We were using an observation chart to help us write poems for this lesson.
I like to swing.
When I swing I see clouds in the sky.
I hear birds singing.
I feel good when I swing.
By Cierra
I loved it! It flowed well, the story was clear, it was entertaining, no red pen here!This may be the second attempt you inked,But it's a perfect Spin, so my friend, you're linked!Recent blog post: The Randomness of Being
There once was a man from Nantucket…Oh forget it!Ed
Your students were luckyThis I can attestPassionate teachersBrought out my bestNo stranger to talk of bodily functionI'd rather read YOUR poetry and keep down my luncheon!Recent blog post: Spin Cycle-Rhyme Time
Your rhyming is better than mine, I see!I'm off to check out your post. No more rhyming for me!